feed back pls......

[molishcowli]

Hi,

My first photo with wide angle lense, feed back pls.......

[afdlips]

nice exposure... but a crop might help... either that or get closer to the... thing. the structure thing.

[LeeIs]

I like it.

one thing that bugs me though is how the sign post interacts with the structure behind it. They seem to be on the same plain but aren't. The two perspectives clash. Look at the top of the sign and the top of the structure, where it they create that triangle. To me it seems a bit of a fight going on between the two. I enjoy the perspective of the large structure and somehow wish the sign wasn't there or placed somewhere else.

excuse the bad grammer ;) typing on the fly.

[ozbuc]

This from an amatuer but I like it as well, it looks to me to have a painted landscape look to it.

[Frog]

Is that sand in front. Personally/subjectively I don't think the angle helps. Perhaps from directly in front?

[Dock Master]

I like the lines. They lead the eyes through the image.

Perhaps a few steps to the right would have given the sign less of of feeling of being stuck to the end of the pavilion.

Overall, I like it.