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I like the concept of this photo a lot, I can certainly appreciate the difficulty of this kind of shot. I think with a little more clarity and it would be a very cool shot.
Don - Try a continuous AF tracking mode, will take some trial and error, maybe some artificial occurance of leaf falling (i.e. you dropping it instead of the tree).
Ella - try a diffuser on your flash, or use some different sort of light to have a more illuminated background.