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    Canon 1DmkII Shooter rylan's Avatar
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    Fall and a nice water fall

    heres another new shot! 50mm lens shot lol
    let me know how to improve this and what i did wrong!
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    Re: Fall and a nice water fall

    I love the shot, but that log/stick in the bottom LH corner is taking my eye away from the rest of the shot. Otherwise, no complaints here
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    Canon 1DmkII Shooter rylan's Avatar
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    Re: Fall and a nice water fall

    thanks again danic, i just added it so it would give you a hint of the surroundings i was shooting in
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    Re: Fall and a nice water fall

    I agree with Danic - no worries though, as long as you like it rylan.
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    Re: Fall and a nice water fall

    Rylan - I like the color and the motion capture, but the waterfall being cut off on the left hand side I think hinders the feeling of the shot for me, just a bit too tight for my likings, but an otherwise great shot.
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    Canon 1DmkII Shooter rylan's Avatar
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    Re: Fall and a nice water fall

    Thanks guys ill try your idea next time i go back
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