Facial Tour

[Don Schaeffer]

Hallucination at Portage and Main


Portage Place



Main Street




West End



Talbot Avenue

[CLKunst]

Don,

With the exception of Portage Place shot these are all work great. My main problem with Portage Place is the uncomfortable composition and soft focus on what should be the main element. The colors are working for you, but the lady's face is too soft. I see interesting action happening in the upper corner but can't see enough of it. Where my eyes keep landing in is this empty middle spot between all of them which I'm pretty sure is not the main point.

The hallucination shot is just that - great interpretation.

Even with the deterioration I like the mans face and think it works with the overall graininess.

I really like the composition and faces at West End the lady on the end is just perfect.

The man on the little cart on Talbot Ave. is an interesting character too.

Good tour - thanks for sharing.

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks for looking. You are a great critic.