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Tuna, excellent image. If you raised the perspective a little, the line which intersects horizontally the top of the gazebo would be lowered to the point where the pillars intersect the support beams.
Although, going through the openings in the hole of the support beams as they are right now works really well.
The BW conversion looks like bonafide BW film, great work.
Good conversion to monochrome. The tonal range is very good. I like the composition, even though my eye / brain is trying to reconcile their heads almost being at the same level, whereas the ground below them seems to slope downward at a considerable angle. It actually makes sense when you see the feet of the lady on the left not touching the ground, which for me really makes the shot.