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    Southern Utah. The temperature was in the single digits that day - at least they have traditional holiday weather. Not sure if this one has a strong enough subject...........

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    Re: f 16

    I keep looking at it thinking there is a shot in there somewhere, with all the snow and the house being white and looking a bit like an extension of the snow pile... but the truck seems to be too centered to me, and once your eyes hit it they move up to that big tree and the power lines.
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    Re: f 16

    It needs someone shovelling snow
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    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

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    Re: f 16

    yes, I agree that there's something missing here. Maybe the human element that you mention Pete, just something. Cara, I see what you mean about the progression. I could PP out those power lines but I'm really wondering if it's even worth all that ... ahhh, so close.

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    Re: f 16

    if the vehicles were removed it would be a pretty good shot of the home and big pine. But as it stands it just looks like a snap shot.

    adding a human element would definitely add a story to it though.

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