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Thread: Experimentation

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    Experimentation

    What do you guys think about this one? I don't know what to think about it, It's nothing I've really done before, was just messing around the other day.
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    Re: Experimentation

    I like the concept here, but feel there should be very little in this scene. I would like to see the shot of the sneakers and shadows alone with no furniture, fan,or hand. A very simplistic approach will work very well.
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    Re: Experimentation

    You image reminds me when I forget to turn off my video camera. I have allot of shots like this.

    Jim B.
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    Re: Experimentation

    Thanks gahspidy, I think I'll try that.

    Quote Originally Posted by jbaldocchi
    You image reminds me when I forget to turn off my video camera. I have allot of shots like this.

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    Ok?

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    Re: Experimentation

    I also like the concept, but feel that the other objects in the scene are distracting. I also think it would be best if it was just a plain concrete floor, perhaps with a knife or two lying on the ground (with some fake blood too!?) and....?
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