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Thread: Evolution

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    Evolution

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    Re: Evolution

    Leels,

    I like the concept, however, I wish the nearest footprint wasn't cut off and a little more light in the hillock. Perhaps crop the bottom foot print out of the photo.

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    Re: Evolution

    I not sure if the cut off foot print bothers me that much or not. It's still a great shot.Did you cut it off on purpose?
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    I really like the tones and your color rendition. However I must agree with others that the cropped footprint is a little disapointing.

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    Re: Evolution

    I like it a lot, but the footprint is weird, I wouldn't worry about it though.

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    Re: Evolution

    i agree with readingr, crop teh bottom footprint, it looks out of place, but other than that its great, goodjob

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    Re: Evolution

    Good idea. I'll echo everyone on the bottom footprint. Just crop it out, it works well w/o it.

    I like the photo overall. However, I am a little disappointed by the background being so dark,.. can't see much of what's there. I think this idea would also work with mud and woods

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    Re: Evolution

    Thanks for the feedback all.

    I now hear what you guys are saying about the last footstep. Although I consciencely included it when I was shooting this. I though it would be more continuous with it. As in saying the evolution continues. But I still like your suggestions and since it's unanimous I think I'll rework this image.
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    Re: Evolution

    i can see where your thinking of the continuos evolution, but if your going for that, just crop half the foot

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    Re: Evolution

    I'll definitely rework this Chris. Thanks again.

    btw, you guys can crop or modify my artwork as you wish. I'm not against that, infact I find it helpful. I should put that in my signature.
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    Re: Evolution

    ok cool, mind if i post it on here, see how it looks cropped?

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