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Another great shot Yoyo. Composition and patterns are terrific with well distributed subjects. I love the light bouncing all over the scene.
Are you sure this isn't part of Gary's great Inside Looking Out series??
Well done , Yoyo. great subject and execution. As a minor point, the main vertical column is leaning to the right, and maybe straightening it out would improve, but I do not find it too distracting. It seems to work as it is, adds a little tension. Good work
You've just made my day (that's good). I rarely ever visit the critique forums and what do I see on the second photo i look at? This one. Very very nice.
The moment I saw this Yoyo it reminded me of a photo posted by Leels not too long ago. Can you remember the one with the people looking out underneath those canopies. The shots are nowhere near the same but there were similarities.
This shot is totally striking. The angular centre section hits me straight away as do the angular reflections on the floor. A little tilt to the left would help alright. It would have been a great shot without the people but it's even better with their inclusion.
Yoy are also a master of weird and wonderful photographic titles.
Tom
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