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It works VM, though I think that the strategic light streaks could be better placed. I agree that all that negative space on the right is too much. This one really cries for a significant zooming in around the subject.
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I think the negative space plays an important role here. I find the guy too centered though so perhaps you could crop out some of the wall on the right?
The cropping issue here is a delicate one. If you take, say, half off the wall on the right, you centre your subject. Even so, on balance, I think it would be better to do so. Having said that, it is a moody and beautifully taken and produced image. Your use of light is masterful.
You could always square format it and remove some of the wall on the right as the others mention. I agree that you certainly control the lighting very well.
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This is awesome man! I really like the mood and the composition of this photo. I would say that this is really awesome! oh wait, yeah I said that already.