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    Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Hi ,

    I took this shot one morning while we were on holiday .I liked the colors through the early morning clouds .
    What do you think of this one ?
    You comments would be appreciated .

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Beautiful shot - the dark voids split bye the brilliant golden light of dawn -- it makes a powerful statement!
    Aaron

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Hello Aaron

    Thank you for your comments .
    Regards
    james

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    beuatiful! Well done...

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Excellent I like the Golden breaks in the sky which are captured on the surface of the sea/ocean below.
    "I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass." from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Hi,
    I like the colour of the pic, however, the compostion is not stong. May be too much negative space which does not hve a pattern.
    yoyo

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Thank you all for your kind comments on this photo .
    I agree with you Yoyo about the not so strong composition and too much of negative space.
    Thank you for mentioning that .That is some area i must still work on .

    Regards
    james

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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    I get lost in the darkness of the bottom of the picture, it would be more interesting if u could like see the water better.
    The colors are amazing
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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    Here is one with a little more light than the previous one .
    What do you think ?

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    james
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    Re: Every cloud have a golden (silver) lining

    These are great colors, but I really prefer your first post. It has much more impact than the second one. I would maybe crop a little bit the bottom of the frame, to give a more panoramic format to the pic and reduce the amount of negative space. But otherwise, it is a keeper for sure. Good job.

    Steph.

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