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Thread: Eve: Modern Day

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    Eve: Modern Day

    Just having a little fun! =) Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to comment on my work. I'm a struggling student (i.e. I'm overly busy), and photography is about all I can do to reach out to other people.

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    "Artisaliethatmakesusreali zetruth" PlantedTao's Avatar
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    Re: Eve: Modern Day

    Great concept and layout on this photo. Just a nice idea that seems to work very well with the composition and theme.
    My only comment for improvement would be for more seperation of the snake's head from it's body. I don't know if you tried to fix that area in PS, but it looks a little funky, maybe its too bright in that area?
    Anyway, nice execution of your idea.
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    Re: Eve: Modern Day

    I agree, maybe try to darken the snakes body in the background. Lovely idea and concept though. Good Job!
    Last edited by ChowChi-Ching; 10-20-2005 at 09:17 AM. Reason: spelling

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    Re: Eve: Modern Day

    I think it's cool, but needs a little refinement. The apple seems too big by proportion and should be pushed back a bit to look smaller and no need to deal with the blow out snake's body.

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