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Love this composition, Amber. You've bees stretching your wings a lot lately.
I do think the empty shell is soft but it might work here....sort of impressionistic.
I'd crop half the blue sky.
Beautiful shot though with obvious thought behind it.
You could even blur the background more, leaving the shell and the foreground sand as they are. Sharpen the shell if you want to. I would't crop because I think to show emptiness you need the empty space. I wouldn't think of a close-up of a shell a photo about emptiness unless, well, you want to show the shell itself is empty
I really like the crop and having taken many a picture of my fish in my tanks as well, this is an excellent photo...What I believe makes this picture go from average to quite good is the title of the photo...
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αποκαλυπτεται γαρ οργη θεου απ ουρανου επι πασαν ασεβειαν και αδικιαν ανθρωπων των την αληθειαν εν αδικια κατεχοντων
διοτι το γνωστον του θεου φανερον εστιν εν αυτοις ο γαρ θεος αυτοις εφανερωσεν
τα γαρ αορατα αυτου απο κτισεως κοσμου τοις ποιημασιν νοουμενα καθοραται η τε αιδιος αυτου δυναμις και θειοτης εις το ειναι αυτους αναπολογητους
Very nice Amber! I really like this shot. I'm going to have to go the other way though on the crop. I like the extra blue of the original version. The larger crop better conveys the "Emptiness" where I feel the tighter crop makes the shot more focused on the shell.
Aaron
Aaron Lehoux * flickr
Please do not edit my photos, thank you.
Very nice Amber! I really like this shot. I'm going to have to go the other way though on the crop. I like the extra blue of the original version. The larger crop better conveys the "Emptiness" where I feel the tighter crop makes the shot more focused on the shell.
Aaron
Xia
I hear you, as too was contemplating the ''emptiness''
Its the title of the photo that complicates this
Again great presentation:thumbsup:
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αποκαλυπτεται γαρ οργη θεου απ ουρανου επι πασαν ασεβειαν και αδικιαν ανθρωπων των την αληθειαν εν αδικια κατεχοντων
διοτι το γνωστον του θεου φανερον εστιν εν αυτοις ο γαρ θεος αυτοις εφανερωσεν
τα γαρ αορατα αυτου απο κτισεως κοσμου τοις ποιημασιν νοουμενα καθοραται η τε αιδιος αυτου δυναμις και θειοτης εις το ειναι αυτους αναπολογητους