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    Where is Snowy? Yoyo Szeto's Avatar
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    Each Flat Has Its Story

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    Re: Each Flat Has Its Story

    Great image, but i have a few suggestions. The photo seems a little jumbled and i think zooming in on one part of it would have been better. Otherwise i think it has some great linear qualtities. Nice photo.

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    Re: Each Flat Has Its Story

    Hi, Yoyo. I like your concept but I find my eyes fluttering the image looking for more people, more "stories" to rest my eyes on and be delighted by. Is that a person taking pictures of a mannequin clothed in a wedding dress? Awesome! Are there more stories in here but I just can't see them, maybe in the window to the left of that? Not sure. Anyways, this is definitely a lot of fun and if there were at least one "story" in each floor, I would want to print it poster size and hang it. And I would crop that very dark top part.

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    Re: Each Flat Has Its Story

    Hi Drew, Thanks for your suggestion and it is worth to try next time.

    Hi Jaqui, Yes, a person is taking pictures of a mannequin clothed in a wedding dress in one of the flat. There is also a coffee shop on the same floor of the wedding dress flat. Thanks a lot for sharing your view.

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