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Great image, but i have a few suggestions. The photo seems a little jumbled and i think zooming in on one part of it would have been better. Otherwise i think it has some great linear qualtities. Nice photo.
Hi, Yoyo. I like your concept but I find my eyes fluttering the image looking for more people, more "stories" to rest my eyes on and be delighted by. Is that a person taking pictures of a mannequin clothed in a wedding dress? Awesome! Are there more stories in here but I just can't see them, maybe in the window to the left of that? Not sure. Anyways, this is definitely a lot of fun and if there were at least one "story" in each floor, I would want to print it poster size and hang it. And I would crop that very dark top part.
Hi Drew, Thanks for your suggestion and it is worth to try next time.
Hi Jaqui, Yes, a person is taking pictures of a mannequin clothed in a wedding dress in one of the flat. There is also a coffee shop on the same floor of the wedding dress flat. Thanks a lot for sharing your view.