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    Dusk on the Tennessee

    My friends were taking the jet skis out of the water just before dark. I thought the colors were to beautiful to leave without giving it a shot. Taken at F2.3, 1/30 with some cropping. What do you think?
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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    When I first saw the post, I expected something brighter, more colors, more vibrant.
    Then I saw your image, and it first came out VERY dark. My eye was caught though, and I kept looking at the image. "Night Vision" kicked in, and the image started to get clearer, more details came out, and I swear, the color seemed to start to change. It turned into an image that was quite pleasant to look at, and get a warm feeling of being there with.

    However, I feel that others may not actually wait to see the image. Without comprimising it, see if it can be lightened up a bit to add a bit more contrast to it. I'm not talking repainting the skies, but just a bit of difference. Hopefully, the same feeling can be gotten.
    "Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of
    arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, camera in one hand, a beer in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming "WOO HOO what a ride!"

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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    On my monitor the photo does not appear to be too dark. However, I thought it would be a good adeal to add some brightness/contrast and look at it again to see if the feeling is still there. I can live with both photos.

    Thanks!
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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    Maybe it was just my monitor, but I feel that the adjustments you made on the second image are great. Very subtle, not meant to repaint everything, but at least on my monitor, it does make a large enough difference. The second image captured my eye right away, and I was able to see some things I missed with the first one. It still comes across as a very warm, inviting photo. Thanks for putting up with the rants.
    "Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of
    arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, camera in one hand, a beer in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming "WOO HOO what a ride!"

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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    Quote Originally Posted by Eagle_Eye
    On my monitor the photo does not appear to be too dark. However, I thought it would be a good adeal to add some brightness/contrast and look at it again to see if the feeling is still there. I can live with both photos.

    Thanks!

    Eagle_Eye,
    After tossing this photo back and forth in my mind, I sort of wanted to see what it would look like with the subject being the colorful sky and its reflection. And the other things as silhouettes. I hope you don't mind!

    Scott
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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    I really like the photo, and I think Scott's adjustment makes it even better. I might have wanted to crop the bottom to take out the shoreline, leaving just the dock coming out into the picture and giving more weight to the sky. But the two oversymmetrical shrubs would have to be removed as well, so no dice.

    Either way, a nice shot.

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    Re: Dusk on the Tennessee

    Thanks for the comments bkdonnelly, and thanks to my buddy Scott for adding his touch of perfection.

    I must admit, I have not looked at a lot of my photos to see if I could touch them up a little and make them have a different feel or make them more appealing to the eye. This forum is a great place to gain knowledge and insight from several others that share the same hobby.

    Always looking for another great shot,

    Dudley

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