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    dusk

    at Mission Bay (San Diego).

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    Re: dusk

    Beautiful color GB and the silhouetted palms are perfect in their placement. I would try to tone down the parking lot light a bit.
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    Re: dusk

    Hi GB, I keep thinking the trees in the foregorund are swinging sweepers. The colour is good as mentioned by Chunk.
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    Re: dusk

    Overall I really like the range of sharp colours that you have captured here. There does seem to be a lot going on in the bottom half of the photograph, I keep on wanting to crop but it obviously isn't possible. Inspiring.

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    Re: dusk

    I love the color of the sky in this, and the light created by the streetlamp. The silhouettes are very nice, but I keep wishing for a bit more space between the two in the front there...the ones that overlap.
    Beautiful colors though.

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    Re: dusk

    Thks for the comments folks. Emily, I didnt even notice how close the poles were I was also worried when I scanned it that the bottom parking area was a little too dominating... It seems to just barely avoid that. If only there was a moon in the top-left part of the sky! I added a fake one below (you can tell it's fake btw),

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