Downtown Nashville at night.

[payn817]

The "batman" building from an alley. Loose the cars, or is this just a waste of time?

[Coastal Flyer]

Nice clear, sharp image, DOF, with the moon, perspective is good, framing, etc., but I just can't get past the solid wall at the end of the alley. Lose the wall and I think you have something.

CF

[swmdrayfan]

payn, I like your choice of b/w for this...as far as everything else---I don't know.

[readingr]

Payn

Now if the alley was dark then the wall wouldn't bother me or the cars, but it seems a little bright to have the wall, it just seems to stop the eyes there and its a hurdle to get past it.

As for the rest it looks good except for the spot above the moon, is it a plane, planet or dust?

Roger

[payn817]

Thanks for the feedback on this. The spot above the moon is a planet/star. I agree with the wall back there, but was hoping there was enough depth to overcome it, owell (i could always burn it down, i guess).

[Devin MacShawn]

This photo is 2 sexy. The only thing it needs is a beautiful model in the center.

[payn817]

That would have been terrific! Thanks for your input on this one.

[Rocket_Scientist]

I like it, and I don't think I would lose the cars. When I first saw it,
I thought of glitz being brought down to reality--big city lights contrasted
with the fact that people have to park somewhere. With that in mind, I
thought the wall was quite effective, although, perhaps it could be a little
less bright.

[jbaldocchi]

I would crop out up to the parking lot wall and the building wall on the right hand side.

Jim B.

[LeeIs]

The wall doesn't bother me as much as the hot light to the right. I always try to avoid those when shooting at night but sometimes you just can't. The top part of this scene without that light could've been spectacular. It's still a nice image though. thanks for sharing.