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Thread: Down The Tube

  1. 01-11-2008, 12:44 PM #1
    Shayne
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    Down The Tube

    An apprehensive trip down the slide
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  2. 01-11-2008, 04:16 PM #2
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    Re: Down The Tube

    precious!!! Those are once in a lifetime moments..Those eyes are indeed precious and make the photo IMO...I would try and brighten it up a tad and maybe sharpen the edges and the eys a little to really bring them out...All in all, Nice capture!!.
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    αποκαλυπτεται γαρ οργη θεου απ ουρανου επι πασαν ασεβειαν και αδικιαν ανθρωπων των την αληθειαν εν αδικια κατεχοντων
    διοτι το γνωστον του θεου φανερον εστιν εν αυτοις ο γαρ θεος αυτοις εφανερωσεν
    τα γαρ αορατα αυτου απο κτισεως κοσμου τοις ποιημασιν νοουμενα καθοραται η τε αιδιος αυτου δυναμις και θειοτης εις το ειναι αυτους αναπολογητους
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  3. 01-11-2008, 05:34 PM #3
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    Re: Down The Tube

    In addition to jgredline's comments, have you thought about cropping it tighter? I think it would give the photo more impact.
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  4. 01-11-2008, 07:47 PM #4
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    Re: Down The Tube

    Look at those eyes! Great picture.
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  5. 01-14-2008, 08:32 AM #5
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    Re: Down The Tube

    It is a great composition and a nice catch but overall I think it is too dark.

    I'd say lighten it until the whites of his eyes are white.
    No, I DON'T need that.
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