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Better is a relative term. I don't think either picture works but I like what you're trying to achive. Soft focus could work in the horizontal image (top) if you had included home plate in focus.
Thanks for your comments everyone. I wanted to try something a little different from the normal ballpark shots. Your points are noted, and hopefully the next time I try something of this nature I'll keep those in mind.
John