Down on the corner, Out in the street

[rylan]

heres a shot from the other day, around 7 pm sun starting to go down
let me know what you think

[readingr]

rylan,

I like the colours taken at the right time of day.

I feel the building needs to be rotate a little to the left to get the corner edge vertical. It is possible to correct the tilt of the building by using PS's transform tool so that all the edges become vertical.

The only other thing that caught my eye is the light encroaching into the frame top left. Clone this out to tidy it up.

Roger

[Greg McCary]

I like the subject and composition. I do think it is to tight at the bottom. I guess you was as far back as you could get?

[rylan]

yeah i was up against the wall of another building lol couldnt get any further back at all

[Frog]

Great color and example of the golden hour.
I'm thinking that if you had moved a little to your right you could have got a shot that wouldn't be so tight in the lower left of the building but I wasn't there so don't know.

[rylan]

maybe ill try a re shoot haha

[Don Schaeffer]

This is hyper-realistic, like a surrealistic painting. I love the sharpness and the way the light seems to mold the shape. In the upper left corner there is the left over of somethingthat should be cloned out.

[rylan]

is a street light, and i can never get cloning correct so i didint bother lol if anyone is bored and would like to give it a shot go for it

[Ptax]

I LOVE this shot. I hadn't noticed the bit o' street lamp until it was mentioned in other critiques. I am not sure what exactly I like so much, but the picture really grabs me. It might be all the detail in the building or the lighting or . . .

[rylan]

thanks ptax

[GB1]

Wow, an impressively angled shot. Makes one appreciate the engineering that went into designing and building it, though the perspective does make it seem tilted. You needed one of those tilting film plane cameras (forget what they're called... they're excellent for architectural shots like this.........) And yeah there's definitely something entering the frame up there in the upper left! Very sharp photo, good DOF, great detail.,

G