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Thread: Douthit Bridge

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    Douthit Bridge

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    I like the composition and really like the soft grays.
    If you can bring out the sign a bit more..not too much..I think it would be perfect.
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Greg - yes it is a nice shot, and the tones receding into the bridge are lovely - that is what mono was made for! I am in two minds though about whether or not you should take a little off the sides. On balance, I think you should, but it's a close call.

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Thanks Frog, Thanks Mike. Here is cropped and sign dodged ever so slightly.

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Much better I think .. You've turned a decent shot into a really good one.

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Greg, hmm I think the second is feeling a little cramped now..?.. We had a similar bridge called shallowford on our vacation..one car bridge and olddd. ok, I think, in the second, you should try losing the sign and crop down to the first crossbeam below it..more a pano and add in the border. Keeps your eye flowing down the bridge taking in all the steel structure..?..
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Thanks again Mike, Thanks as well Rod. I do have a version without the sign. I was shooting over a fence here but I crawled under the fence onto the bridge, muddy place for sure. I also took a few medium format shots with a Yashica 124G.
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    I prefer the crop. much more pleasing to look at. A little too much shrubbery in the front of the first version for my taste.

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Thanks Shooter T
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    I like how you dodged the sign but prefer the uncropped version.
    I guess you'll have to decide which one you like. Either way a good shoot.
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Greg, I like the first one the best. An object that big does need a little extra room.

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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Greg......as always, another fine piece of work. Either version works, and the choice to go mono is an excellent one as others have said. :thumbsup:
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    Re: Douthit Bridge

    Thanks again Frog, Thanks Tyson and John
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