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[amorton1437]

I am thinking I need more on the top and bottom right?



f/5.6, iso 1600, 55.0mm, 1/30s

[GB1]

I'm ok with the top but think it's too clipped off at the bottom, and maybe the right side is too close to the edge of the frame. Not sure of the angle on this one, but it is different ... I think it would benefit from a deeper DOF however, at least at this angle (too much fade out at various places). I like the eye peeking through, but you can't really see it. That may add mystery. Not sure about how hot it is in some areas and dark in others. The dark is OK, but it just seems too bright in some areas.

G