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Thread: Dock Picture

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    Dock Picture

    This is a picture of a Dock in the Pocono Lake Preserve, a local community filled with million dollar homes, Quakers, and the likes. Overall, an interesting place to spend a day trespassing.

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    Re: Dock Picture

    Looking at this photo I just want to yank the cross section at the end of the dock and make it parallel with the horizon. I am not sure if I like the exposure and contrast but it seems ok as a shot of a grey day.

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    Re: Dock Picture

    Exposure and contrast look okay on my screen. You may want to try either dusk or dawn to get something a little more interesting colorwise.

    Really, I'd just like to see something of interest at the end of the dock. Ever heard of converging lines? Basically, the lines of the dock draw your attention down it, and when you get there, there is nothing to look at.

    Although I have to agree, it does look like a nice place to spend the day trespassing.

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