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    Dock



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    Re: Dock

    This really tells a story. I love the striations in the water, the cloud patterns in the sky, the way you brought out the white shirts on the left, and the boat (which is perfectly-situated) on the right.

    Not sure what I would do but possibly crop about a third of the sky out. But's that a big maybe.

    Actually, there are also what appear to be reverse halos (dark patches) around the boat and the steps. Not sure if that's my imagination.

    Great shot.

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    Re: Dock

    Great capture. Maybe a little dark??

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    Re: Dock

    The capture is great, but it definitely needs to be lightened up a little so the viewer doesn't have to hunt through the pic so much.

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    Re: Dock

    Elements of this shot are good Liban, though I can't help but feel that something is missing. Not sure .. hmm .. perhaps the darkness is making it too hard to see what the people are doing (?) I don't know. LUV the calm, textured water between the boat and dock. The sky is pretty, though not great, and the right side of the image doesn't do anything for the shot besides make it more horizontal and add to the stability (which, of course, is good).

    Was this sunrise or sunset?

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