Discoloured Backhoe

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  • 06-21-2008, 08:46 PM
    danic
    Discoloured Backhoe
    I loaded a similar photo earlier on, but in the end I didn't like it, so I didn't post it up.

    I've since played around with it a little more as I have learned a little more about Elements. I'm trying to take everyday photo's and make something from them. It's kinda hard sometimes, so I find this type of photography challenging. Hope you like it.

    http://gallery.photographyreview.com...edit-1-web.jpg

    Cheers,
    Dan
  • 06-21-2008, 09:12 PM
    shespawn
    Re: Discoloured Backhoe
    I like what you are trying to do, but I don't think the focus of the photo should be on the ground, you should move the lighted part of the photo up a bit more so the viewer is drawn to the backho, not the dirt. Naturally you go to the brightest spot in the photo.
  • 06-21-2008, 10:05 PM
    danic
    Re: Discoloured Backhoe
    I didn't want the centre of the light to be in the middle of the photo, hence why it's at the ground. Perhaps re-framing the shot as well as re-adjusting the lighting effect might have the desired effect.
  • 06-22-2008, 02:13 AM
    shespawn
    Re: Discoloured Backhoe
    Sorry, I understood that you wanted it off-center and it looks really good like that, I just meant the main focus is the dirt... perhaps even maybe coloring that one hotspot a little would help. I do really like it though
  • 06-22-2008, 06:18 AM
    Frog
    Re: Discoloured Backhoe
    I don't know why I like it but I do, so I'll be watching the comments you get here.

    I do know I think the bright ground spot is where it should be. My eye goes to it but its position quickly leads my eye to the subject.
  • 06-22-2008, 09:01 AM
    fx101
    Re: Discoloured Backhoe
    I would do another omni right on the tractor... there's nothing at the focus of the light-source.