Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. #1
    Ilford Nut Dzerzhinski46's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2004
    Location
    People's Republic of Berkeley, CA
    Posts
    623

    Dinner for Three

    Comments and critique welcome. Not quite what I think it should be.

    Dzerzhinski

    "But what is strength without a double share of wisdom." John Milton

    Lost Planet Cameraman #8


  2. #2
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Dinner for Three

    A few things.
    The fork on the left are just a tad bit too cropped, I say either put it in or take it out. It bugs me when things are slightly outside the edges.

    There is an object on the bottom right that needs to be cloned out and not cropped becuase the edge of the shot will be too close to the plate if you cropped it out.

    There are sauce marks & pasta on the edges of the plate that should be cleaned up or removed from the edges so that all the food is within the centre part of the plate.

    The plate has too much food I think and the green "parsley" is over done but that's why the food stylists get paid the big bucks lol.

    I hope I was of help.

    Cheers
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  3. #3
    is back jar_e's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Calgary, Alberta
    Posts
    3,264

    Re: Dinner for Three

    Some interesting aspects in this shot, which I'm not sure if they were on purpose or not. Of course, the title, I'm presuming, is from the three plates in the top. Then, you only have two forks, which is kinda quirky ( in a good way), and then the one main dish. The one thing I don't like is the picture seems a tad overexposed in area, the main problem being the table in the bottom left.

    Nice shot,

    Jared

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. What's for dinner?
    By berrywise in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: 07-18-2004, 11:35 PM
  2. ˇFeliz Dia de las MADRES!
    By Asylum Steve in forum ViewFinder
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 05-09-2004, 09:31 PM
  3. New York take 2
    By natatbeach in forum ViewFinder
    Replies: 71
    Last Post: 04-24-2004, 05:33 AM
  4. a friend cooking dinner
    By stew in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 02-17-2004, 05:35 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •