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    Diner

    Shot at night through a window. Not the crispest image but composition? Comments as always are welcomed..
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    Re: Diner

    Quote Originally Posted by Hexnut
    Shot at night through a window. Not the crispest image but composition? Comments as always are welcomed..
    I like it, though one thing immediately comes to mind: Something/someone occupying those chairs?

    Composition looks good, but I think a person or persons would have "added" more to the shots. Some WB correction and sharpening might help too. Also, try repairing the washed out tablecloth, by cloning from the right side which still has some detail.

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    Re: Diner

    A person or even something on the counter or both.
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    Re: Diner

    Needs some sort of dineresque stuff in the shot. Right now it seems to missing anything to attract my attention.

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    Re: Diner

    Actually I live the thought behind this one, looks a bit blown out though and nothing in focus. I'd have left a bit more on the left to get a clean chair, otherwise comp is great for me. S
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