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Lik eit - it's a bit like one of those optical illusions - I tend to look at the middle black space a little toto much. Wish it was posted larger so I coudl see it better.
I like this a lot, perhaps you could move them a little closer together, so there isn't quite so much black space. Definitely make the black look black, not gray, otherwise it looks very good.