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Great lines on this one yoyo! They lead the eye to key points, yet the eye easily travels to take it the entire scene.
This is a good expression of the dialogue between man and art(this is my take anyway)...it makes me contemplate what each individual perceives when looking at art.
I'm truly impressed by the consistency you have maintained in this series.
Great work.
Cheers.
I'm always mentally photographing everything as practice.
Minor White
Very clean perspective lines here, you have a good eye for this aesthetic Yoyo. I like the quietness of this space and wonder what part of the mural she is looking at. Another lovely piece for this very interesting series. How many do you plan to include? Are you working on a showing for these?
The nasty concrete canopy contrasts so well with the heavenly wall opposite. As has already been said the lines are so strong. The dialogue is very powerful in this one Yoyo.
Tom
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
i like this one alot, however i feel that with out the fence it would be even stronger, it seems to distract my eye from the focal point of the mural. i feel that the roof lines are strong enough to lead to the person on thei own. not sure how youd change it though. i like this one the best so far though (out of 5).
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