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    Dia

    An HDR of DIA, taken before the one I took the Sea-Tac shot.

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    Re: Dia

    It has nice geometry. But I think it's missing something. Perhaps some people, or luggage coming down the conveyer, ? - as is I guess it is without a central theme. I do like how the upper part is basically b&w and the bottom has the colors. That makes it seem like a natural spot color photo.

    I haven't been to SeaTac in about 20 yrs. Those blue arches remind me of Seattle, which has a futuristic feel to it.
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    Re: Dia

    I don't like it, and like GB1 I feel something is missing. It looks too empty, or too much space.
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    Re: Dia

    I do have one with people under who are motion blurred.
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