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    deserted cover girl

    Yes, found this in the Nevada desert.
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    Re: deserted cover girl

    neat shot. I think a little more space around the edges and also the book not being so straight along the side would help, but I really like the angle of the beer bottle and its shadow. the fade on the cover is good. I wish there was also a third element (odds are better than evens).

    Seems like Nevada is full of stuff like this, like it's a thoroughfare.. people dumping their stuff to and from Vegas. Too bad too, cause it's a pretty state.

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    Re: deserted cover girl

    Nice shot and good placement of the bottle.
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    Re: deserted cover girl

    I wish it wasn't so contrasty. Otherwise it is a really neat image and find.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: deserted cover girl

    Very good find and how it's positioned together. I agree about loosening up the frame a bit, and s bit less contrast.
    Well spotted.
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    Re: deserted cover girl

    Thanks everyone, I'll work on the contrast.

    I didn't want to move it about, there's a bush in the way of going wider.
    But maybe that's the third element?

    I'll look at the other photos and see what I've got.
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