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    Desert Junker

    Came across this on a hike in Joshua Tree National Forest. Any thoughts?
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    Re: Desert Junker

    I think this is a great find. I hope you had the chance to walk around and take a e few more shots ...it is a subject with great potential. This photo is well exposed and the colors are really nice. I am not sure if I would have included the blurry bush in the front, but it sort of works. The car is very sharp and in focus, with the background a little out of focus ...and I like that.

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    Re: Desert Junker

    Thanks llewpics, I agree about the bush, unfortunately I wanted to get this angle with my 100mm macro lens and I had to include that bush. I wasn't sure if it ruined the shot or not, the main reason I posted this shot. I did get about 200 shots from every angle, even some close up macro shots. Here is another one I liked, I just wished it was from a lower perspective. What do you think.
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    Re: Desert Junker

    I like the second one better. This looks like it was later in the day and the warm light works well. It reminds of Grapes of Wrath book ...cool.

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    Re: Desert Junker

    I think these would work even better in black and white, especially the first one with the washed out surroundings..

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    Re: Desert Junker

    I like the second one better from a composition standpoint.
    It would be a cool place to revisit under different lighting, either sunrise or sunset or maybe even under the moon and stars. Or stormy skies...

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    Re: Desert Junker

    Actually it was sunrise, the first shot was at sunrise and the second was about ten minutes after. The sun comes up fast and hard in the desert.

    I didn't even think about Black and White. I liked the color so much from the rust. I will play with some B&W shots

    Thanks for the comments guys

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    Re: Desert Junker

    How did you move the car?
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    Re: Desert Junker

    Matt - I like the second posting better because it shows the JT rocks. I see that the DOF is purposely shallow to separate it from the rocks, but I would prefer the entire car be sharp. I may also crop a little off the bottom, but this is a nit pick.

    This is a great find (where is it there?). However, it's also a little hard to see this as a car/truck because the seats have fallen down. Guess you can't expect things to be in great shape out there though.

    I think of the famous Bodie (ghost town) car and how good of shape it is in, but that's only because it's a very controlled park and scavenging/shooting isn't allowed.
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    Re: Desert Junker

    Here is another angle!
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    Re: Desert Junker

    that is nice

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    Re: Desert Junker

    Adamo, I asked how you moved the car because, evne though the first two shots are almost, if not, identical angle, the background has changed drastically? Am I missing something?
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    Re: Desert Junker

    Frog,

    The fist image was shot with a 100mm macro lens, which is why that bush is in the shot. I had to stand pretty far away to get the entire car/truck in the shot. I love that lens, but I have to move around to get the shots I want and sometimes its impossible without bringing a sledge hammer and a weed whacker with me. The second was shot with a 25mm wide angle lens at a much closer distance.

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    Ah ha! That makes sense.
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    Re: Desert Junker

    I like the second and third shots,

    I do prefer the third, it shows the area around it

    very nice find

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