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Thread: The Descent

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    The Descent

    So let me know what you think...........does the perspective work? Really trying to get a good view of the ceiling as it looks like a face with the sprial coming out of its mouth.........or am I going mad............:blush2:

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    Re: The Descent

    It looks a bit like that to be sure but I think the image is dreadfully overworked.
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    Re: The Descent

    My first impression was "Wow!" Powerful image. And I think that, in the right space/on the right wall, it would be a wonderful addition to the decor. Actually, I'd kinda like to see it as a mural covering an entire wall. Now that would turn some heads.

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    Re: The Descent

    I second overbeyond. I see the face, and in general I tend to really admire your work, but in this case the processing is certainly overdone. I'm wondering what you would get if you stepped forward about 20 feet and laid on your back while shooting.
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    Re: The Descent

    wow - what a great building! i see the idea of the face - and i think you have a really amazing vision! i think it would be interesting to see a shot focused on the spiral staircase itself.

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