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Thread: Delta Dawn

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    Delta Dawn

    The first rays of light breaking thru the overcast.Lightplay on a delta shaped structure.
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    Re: Delta Dawn

    1st one is very nice Rick. I think I would try and layer the sky seperately and work the levels down a little. And then maybe undo that..but I like the composition and positioning. ...I gotta get one of those wide angles

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    Re: Delta Dawn

    rick....my personal fave is #5. Can't explain why, I just like it.
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    Re: Delta Dawn

    You did a nice job capturing it. The building is really neat from the side, though somewhat boring from the front. I like the bottom shot too ... sort of funny, like the building should have a title on it that says "The No Parking Corporation" or something.
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    Re: Delta Dawn

    Thank you all! It's a fun lense. The "P" sign is my fav. also.

    GB, The security guard of this building said "you need a permit to take pictures here" He came out after I had shot approx. ten shots.

    So, I said thanks,then...exit stage left...with no permit. :O)









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    Re: Delta Dawn

    Hi John,
    Your photos have shown the interesting features of the building. The red and white grids are quite intriguing. By the way, where is the building?
    All the best
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