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Thread: At The Deli

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    At The Deli


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    Re: At The Deli

    I really like the way you have just the counter worker in focus. That pic sums up his day i am sure, Burried with work, the whole day is a blur, and all people can focus on is me.

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    Re: At The Deli

    I think I would like the stuff (that he may be hiding behind thinking Oh! Please dont come in) to be a little clearer. To me it is distracting and looks a little messy. The wall and boards behind are sound. Great idea as usual Tuna.
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    Tuna, that's a brilliant composition with the perfect dof. It's busy yet it feels clean.
    I get straight to the guy (great intensity in his gaze). Then I can wander arround to appreciate the various elements out of focus.

    Seb

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    Excellent shot Tuna…

    Nicely done.
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