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I really like the way you have just the counter worker in focus. That pic sums up his day i am sure, Burried with work, the whole day is a blur, and all people can focus on is me.
I think I would like the stuff (that he may be hiding behind thinking Oh! Please dont come in) to be a little clearer. To me it is distracting and looks a little messy. The wall and boards behind are sound. Great idea as usual Tuna.
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Tuna, that's a brilliant composition with the perfect dof. It's busy yet it feels clean.
I get straight to the guy (great intensity in his gaze). Then I can wander arround to appreciate the various elements out of focus.