A day in the water

[Tyson L. Sparks]

I was out with the kids and did some shooting, what do you think?

[swmdrayfan]

Bottom shot needs some straightening Tyson. How was the water?

[Tyson L. Sparks]

[swmdrayfan]

There ya go!

[GB1]

Nice portrait, esp the first one. But her face and eyes aren't sharp enough for me. That's the first thing that one looks at in a people shot, they should be sharp.
GB

[Rocket_Scientist]

Nice colors with the girl in the towel, but the sky looks bleak and overcast. Was it really like that? Can you "brighten" up the backgound a little? Might make it more cheery...

[Greg McCary]

The first picture works very well. It looks as though you captured her character but you could add a lot more to the image with some PP work, A levels adjustment maybe a curves adjustment and a little shapening would help this a lot. I bet the picture is right out of the camera?