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    A day on the lake.

    took this last summer while i was out hiking. i'm not sure about the framing of it, but i like the colors :-).

    *edit- i'm not sure why this ones so small, stupid photobucket.*



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    Re: A day on the lake.

    It looks like a circular polorizer would have done this shot some good, you may have been able to reduce the haze in the background a bit. I think a little tighter crop on the boat would also be nice. I would leave the trees, but just not as much of them.

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    Re: A day on the lake.

    Hi Dylan,
    The foreground delivers a strong indication of peeping. The people on the boat think that they are away from the paparazzi but they are wrong. I like this shot because it allows me to imagine.
    yoyo

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    Re: A day on the lake.

    Good shot and composition, and I REALLY LIKE the framing! Pretty neat idea and implementation of the idea. Maybe make it a little bigger when posting though, seems like it's worthy of that.

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    Re: A day on the lake.

    thanks for the replys guys. a polarizer wasn't possible for this shot because i used my canon s1 is. but in the future i will use one more for photos like this.

    sounds like a keeper in my book, from your replys. thanks.
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    Nikon D7000 w/grip
    Nikkor AF-S 18-135
    Nikkor AF-S 60mm macro 2.8
    Nikon 70-200 2.8 vr
    Nikon tc-17eII
    Kenoko extension tube set
    SB-600

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