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    A Day In The Garden~

    A day at the Botanical Gardens...


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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    This is EXCELLENT lex! A minor nitpick would be that I would like to see at least a hint of the stems instead of a straight black background but, that just a personal preference.This is a great shot as is. Well done

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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    Quote Originally Posted by Xia_Ke
    This is EXCELLENT lex! A minor nitpick would be that I would like to see at least a hint of the stems instead of a straight black background but, that just a personal preference.This is a great shot as is. Well done

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    Thank You!
    And i tired your idea but i cant seem to bring out the stems without taking away from the over all picture..

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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    lex.....clone out the little bits of flower from the bottom right, and maybe the top right, and I think it's a winner.
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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    Very nice. Agree with John on the cloning.

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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    Quote Originally Posted by swmdrayfan
    lex.....clone out the little bits of flower from the bottom right, and maybe the top right, and I think it's a winner.
    John
    Well I tired it!
    Here are the results tell me what you think!

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    Re: A Day In The Garden~

    Quote Originally Posted by @lex
    Well I tired it!
    Here are the results tell me what you think!

    Alex~
    This is definitely better. A great shot in itself. I think it might look nice in colour too though... have you given that a try (keep the background as is).
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