Dark World Surveilance

[daq7]

As stated before, I have been teaching Lori to use the G11. But she had great composition and artistic sense without me. Great basic shot by her.

I did the PP and the stupid title, so those critiques would be aimed at me. I think I adapted the title to the constraints of leaving in the light sources. Should I have cropped them? I think so, but I like the widest possible angle on the texture in the background.

Anyway.

[jwrightvw]

i like the composure and color but think that the photo should be sharper the grain doesnt do it for me maybe less iso longer shutter speed on a tripod

[n8]

I'd have to agree. This is pretty straight forward, but rather soft...low light and a slow ss no doubt. I would lose the lights.

[Greg McCary]

I like it. Maybe clone the lights. But a minor nit pic.

[daq7]

Cant use tripods in museums, but I agree she was using too slow a film speed. I think possible I overdid the PP on the texture. I tend to like that.