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Thread: Daily Living

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    banished Don Schaeffer's Avatar
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    Daily Living













    Through gritty scratchmarks in my memory,
    I see the small pockets of light
    where I reside in a matrix of gray.

    Dashing into my nest
    to escape the impossible
    has been alright since

    hollow granules
    filled with ice cream
    run through the gravel.

    Emerging from the hole,
    like the captive loving the kidnapper
    I am going to miss my Winnipeg in Winter.
    Last edited by Don Schaeffer; 01-30-2010 at 12:43 PM.

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    Re: Daily Living

    The 2nd one is great, That little girl reminds me of A Chrstmas Story, she has so many layers on her arms are stuck out. She also looks like shes falling out of her stroller from the weight of them.

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    Re: Daily Living

    Thanks Jay

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