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I actually liked the tighter crop better. With the other one it makes it seem more like the father's head is missing, and takes the focus off of the adorable baby girl.
Oher than that it's a bit cool, and dark. I would punch up the color temp and brightness a bit.
John Cowan
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I do like the second one better. I think to me the main focus is more on the girl than the father, so having part of her missing is more distracting than parts of the dad that are missing.
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