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I like the blurred background giving the sense of motion which I'm guessing is from the bus being in motion. Sky is good, too.
You might want to adjust the riders skin tone.
Somethign about that pic is just wrong... You have a blurred out background but the wheel are frozen in time.. that and the near background doesn't look natural.
that and you left a band of grey on the right edge of the frame where you photoshopped in your sky...
It's all a fake patchwork. I added the sky as you see and the blurirng just looked neat so I did it. Who cares about verisimilitude. It's art (or not).