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    Re: The Cyclist

    I like the blurred background giving the sense of motion which I'm guessing is from the bus being in motion. Sky is good, too.
    You might want to adjust the riders skin tone.
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    Re: The Cyclist

    Somethign about that pic is just wrong... You have a blurred out background but the wheel are frozen in time.. that and the near background doesn't look natural.

    that and you left a band of grey on the right edge of the frame where you photoshopped in your sky...

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    Re: The Cyclist

    Biker seems overexposed to me.
    nice sky.
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    Re: The Cyclist

    It's all a fake patchwork. I added the sky as you see and the blurirng just looked neat so I did it. Who cares about verisimilitude. It's art (or not).

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    Re: The Cyclist

    It doesn't flow together well, My first though when i saw it was, it was 2 seperate pictures. the Sky doesn't fit in there.
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    Re: The Cyclist

    Oh well. To me it looks like one of those old movies that uses a fake backdrop in a sound stage.

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