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    A Cup of Coffee and a Cigarette

    shot from a third floor window.
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    Re: A Cup of Coffee and a Cigarette

    It's interesting shot. But I think this is a little over-contrast.

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    Re: A Cup of Coffee and a Cigarette

    Perhaps you want to showcase some shape, form and something else, but it may be better to show details in the shadow/man's clothing and the snow on the top part of the photo.

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    Re: A Cup of Coffee and a Cigarette

    Good eye here. I wish it had a looser crop and more detail. Lots of potential IMO!
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    Re: A Cup of Coffee and a Cigarette

    I like the composition and the point of view but I think the contrast is a bit too high hiding detail in the dark areas.
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