Critque

[nickon]

This was just for fun so i can learn more please comment on what i could have done better XD

[GB1]

I like it a lot. Areas for improvement however are

- get her eyes and face in sharper focus. Perhaps you didn't hold it steady enough when taking it, the shutter speed was too low, she moved, or something. It just isn't sharp enough.

- The illuminance of her shirt is excellant, decent on her face (on one side it's great, the other too dark), but her legs fade out into the background. She should have been wearing brighter pants too.

The background etc is excellant. The exposure is very good and the vanishing pt tracks are excellant. Overall, good job, just work on the sharpness.

gb