Cowboy Series - On Break

[drg]

Fuji Film, 200 Speed. Comments, Critque, and Suggestions welcome as usual.

I'm not exactly happy with this one after resizing, etc. Let me know what you think.

[julsoph]

I would actually love this if the hat weren't so bright.
Also, I think you should either add a little sky at the top, or crop off the top of the structure in the background. As is, it seems like it's not quite right...

Emily

[Seb]

Fuji Film, 200 Speed. Comments, Critque, and Suggestions welcome as usual.

I'm not exactly happy with this one after resizing, etc. Let me know what you think.

Hello DRG,

I enjoy your picture. I like the idea of the hat on the post. However, I agree with Emily regarding her concern on the brightness of the hat and the crop at the top of the frame.
Personally, I'd include a little more sky so the structure doesn't touch the upper part of the frame.

regards

Seb

[curious and learning]

Beautiful...

[drg]

Thank you all for the comments.

I am going to rescan the neg to improve the hat situation. Will repost.

[drg]

Here's the result from the rescan and some adjustments.