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    corner store

    Which one do you prefer? or tell me how I could have done better. Unfortunately, there was road construction debris in front of the store. I would appreciate your comments.
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    Re: corner store

    OK, I like the crop on the bottom shot and take some additional space off the top as you've done on the top shot. Might have been better to take this from a lower position (I'm guessing you were standing). Processing the one shot in HDR might add some additional dimension to this as well.
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    Re: corner store

    Shootme - thank your for you for your comments. postprocessing using HDR could be interesting, but I don't know how to do it.

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    Re: corner store

    The next floor looks as if it could have been interesting and for that reason I would consider taking it in portrait rather than landscape giving more of the second floor and cropping the left a bit.

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    Re: corner store

    Have a Google on HDR software there should be some out there you can trial, I can't remember the name of the one I use but it's simple, if you like I can send you the name.
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