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Thread: Contemplation

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    Contemplation

    This was a little boy outside my high school who was toughtfully observing the world that was around him. I thought the black and white tone was appropiate. What are your thoughts on the image?
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    Re: Contemplation

    He looks a little young for High School but I like the photo and your composition within the frame. Good B&W tonal range. I might sharpen the image a bit more.

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    Re: Contemplation

    Humorous..

    I second that it could be sharper. But I would also up the contrast just a small amt. The image is slightly cramped to me also.. I would back out a bit and leave a little space in front of where he is looking.

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    Re: Contemplation

    hah well I said outside by the high school not a high school attendee..:-)

    GB I had looked at up the contrast but was afraid that doing so I would lose the tone in his face. -->
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