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Thread: Cone & Needles

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    Cone & Needles




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    Re: Cone & Needles

    Very sharp and nice colours, but I think that it lacks any real point of interest. Try maybe filling the frame with the pine cone and needles.

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    Re: Cone & Needles

    Quote Originally Posted by Shooter Tiff
    Very sharp and nice colours, but I think that it lacks any real point of interest. Try maybe filling the frame with the pine cone and needles.
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    Re: Cone & Needles

    id agree not super interesing. the needles stickign down on the ulhc should be avoided. and i'd like to see a larger apature (lower f number) used to blur the background more.
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    Re: Cone & Needles

    Tighten the crop to include only the pinecone ad the branch.

    Nice exposure too.

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    Re: Cone & Needles

    This close? - TF



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