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    Concentration...

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    Camera Model Name
    Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
    Tv(Shutter Speed)
    1/8Sec. (Handheld)
    Av(Aperture Value)
    F4.0
    Metering Modes
    Evaluative metering
    Exposure Compensation
    +2/3
    ISO Speed
    800
    Lens
    28-105mm
    Focal Length
    105.0 mm
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    Re: Concentration...

    My first thought was, what's he doing? Is he playing a piano, playing a harmonica, sitting at a bar with a couple of drinks? My second thought was, damn, that's pretty sharp considering it was handheld at 1/8 of a second.

    For me, this image doesn't show concentration. For starters, I can't tell what he's suppose to be concentrating on. It almost appeard to me that he's sleeping. I think the image would work well, if I could see just what he is concentrating on. I'm assuming it's a piano, but it's really just a guess.
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    Re: Concentration...

    Oh, I guess just because I knew what he was doing I would asume everyone else would. You make a god point.

    That blue plastic in front of his face is a NINTENDO DS, handheld video game.

    Thanks for the critique!
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    Re: Concentration...

    Ah, now it makes more sense to me. I can see where you're coming from now.
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