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Thread: A Color Candid

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    A Color Candid


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    Re: A Color Candid

    Splendid shot. Perfect again.
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    Re: A Color Candid

    Nice composition. I'd lose the dark spot on the sidewalk..top right. Cloned not cropped.
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    Re: A Color Candid

    I suggest a crop to get rid of the shadow, that'll help the composition more i think, i'm not sure how, but it just looks better. nice picture otherwise

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    Re: A Color Candid

    Wow. Perfect.
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    Re: A Color Candid

    I like the red strip on the curb and the red coffee cup. By the way, the outfit of the fella is very 1960s.
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    Re: A Color Candid

    Color, Tuna? What the heck, did hell actually freeze over??!?!?

    Looks good. I like the way he's looking back against the direction the rest of his body is aiming. The red adds to the shot. I think there may be too much negative space, and the white brick to the left (and above) his head is distracting. I also wonder if this shot really needs that grainy effect?

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